There are many talented people in our community. Some share their talents through word, others through the visual medium. Share your work with us, and fine tune your technique with our constructive criticism.
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Rembrandt Q. Einstein
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by Rembrandt Q. Einstein » Sun Oct 19, 2003 3:50 am
HINT: try using
http://www.villagephotos.com, or
http://www.photobucket.com, or changing the extensions on those to .txt so that you fool geocities, otherwise it doesn't allow outside linkage for images
Other than that, they are very good, oh, and welcome to the forum!
PS:I'm not sure exactly how the .txt thing works, so you might want to ask someone else how to do that
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Cryptonomicon
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by Cryptonomicon » Sun Oct 19, 2003 2:46 pm
After copy/pasting them into the thing, I must say they're all very good, but the first one, of spiderman, seems a bit distorted. Like... Why is his forearm more muscular than his upper arm? And the panel in he lowere left of the same one, I can't tell whats hppening at all, save for that it involves a jack-o-lantern.
All the other ones are very good, and I especially like the darth vader one.
A Flea and a Fly in a flue
Were imprisoned so what could they do?
Said the flea, "let us fly!"
And the fly, "let us flee!"
So they flew through a flaw in the flue!
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Rembrandt Q. Einstein
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by Rembrandt Q. Einstein » Sun Oct 19, 2003 5:17 pm
Cryptonomicon, I think youa re having trouble with the shading on Spider-Man's arm, because I thought that too when I first looked at it, but the inside of the arms tends to blend in with his body, so it ends up looking distorted
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Cryptonomicon
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by Cryptonomicon » Sun Oct 19, 2003 7:10 pm
Thanks Rembrandt, I see it now.
A Flea and a Fly in a flue
Were imprisoned so what could they do?
Said the flea, "let us fly!"
And the fly, "let us flee!"
So they flew through a flaw in the flue!
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Tom May
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by Tom May » Sun Oct 19, 2003 8:19 pm
Well..for the Spiderman one, I attempted to use forshortening. making the hand look bigger than the rest of the body, though it was always a bit difficult for me to do it. And the shadowy panel..its supposed to be the Green Goblin's eyes. The Pumpkin, is actually a Pumpkin Bomb, with glowings eyes, which is what i was using for the light source.
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Rembrandt Q. Einstein
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by Rembrandt Q. Einstein » Sun Oct 19, 2003 8:58 pm
actually I thought the foreshortening was well done (i suck at it myself) but you should try and fix the shading on spidey's arms to keep them from bledning with the body.
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