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by Rembrandt Q. Einstein » Sat Nov 01, 2003 8:55 pm
As far as the art goes, it is really good, but as it is now, does not fit a comic very well, try taking out some of the line-shading (either fill in the color totally via photo/paintshop, or leave it blank), and that will make the art a bit crisper and clearer. Take a look at most comics (especially B&W ones) they try to avoid unnecessary shading so the artwork looks cleaner, and is easier to distinguish.
Other than that, the drawings are very good, and I like the ideas you've come up with, keep it up!
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